This is simply a copied version of a contents page in an already existing magazine, however, I have altered it appropriatly, i.e. the title and information on what my magazine contains valid information suitable for a college magazine.
I think overall I managed to sucessfully create a layout suitable for my college magazine, although i think it could be presented bolder and more attractivly.
I think overall I managed to sucessfully create a layout suitable for my college magazine, although i think it could be presented bolder and more attractivly.
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Overall the products are of a pretty fair quality, Dayna, but I do think your evaluation and analysis of them could be developed a little further, particulary about the Contents Page, where you have not said much at all.
Also, you have note posted an entry about the planning process, which I asked you to do. Please add this.
Some spellings to correct too. For example "intellectual". Have a read through and check any you are not sure about.
This is reasonable work but I think you can do better with more concentration. It is tellingly incomplete and you must finish it (rememeber the examiner will see it!).
Sean
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